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@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 # Bookshop With Address Data From S/4HANA
 
 This is an extended bookshop with business-partner address data from S/4HANA.
-When the user creates an order, using the value help of the shipping address 
-triggers a synchronous request to S/4HANA yielding all possible addresses
+When the user creates an order and uses the value help of the shipping address,
+a synchronous request to S/4HANA is triggered yielding all possible addresses
 belonging to this business partner. Once an address is selected, its data
 is replicated into a local database. To keep data in sync, an event handler
-is registered listening to all changes of business partners updating the 
+is registered listening to all changes of business partners which updates the 
 local database table.
 
 
@@ -58,4 +58,4 @@ cds run --in-memory
 After starting the app, go to http://localhost:4004/fiori.html#Shell-home and open the app `Manage Orders` to create an order.
 Use the value help of the shipping address to select an address. Create an order item and save the order.
 Then change the address of your business partner (in the mocked case you can trigger the PATCH request in `req.http` ). Refresh
-the object page of your order and see the change.
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+the object page of your order and see the change.